I really appreciated Prof. Bolger’s lecture on Monday. Not only did I enjoy the content, but I really respect how he is so open about talking about the class format. It was good to hear his reasonings for the structure, as well as see that he really values and respects the input of the class. I really appreciate him.
February 28, 2007 at 9:11 pm
2nd rough draft…
Kaity, it looks like you have some great material to build on. As you noted yourself, you need a thesis statement which will help bring things together. using sub-headings will help. you have some great thoughts on both the culture of the rescue mission as well as the surrounding culture, be sure to show how your kingdom vision bridges those 2 spheres.